EPIPHANY

Although friends discussed it, you never completely understand the joy of holding a grandchild in your arms.  This month the experience became reality as our youngest daughter gave birth to a beautiful baby girl in California.  Over a four week period we watched Hannah blossom.  Her cheeks got bigger and her frame filled out.  One of my favorite moments was to have her nestle frog-like under my chin and fall asleep on my chest.  Much to our amazement we found it really does take a village as my wife and I supported the care of Hannah.

My writing became secondary since the focus was on our new grandbaby.  I did get some research done and wrote down ideas on plot and characters when they popped into my exhausted brain.  On the last day of our stay, I participated in an online workshop (first of eight) led by my writing coach, Alida Winternheimer.  The focus of this first session was character development.  There were a total of ten participants ranging from as far off as England and as close as a Minneapolis suburb.

My major take away involved how the description of a scene could give the reader insights into the nature and background of the character.  I smiled to myself remembering an initial attempt when I wrote an extremely detailed explanation of a character.  In the margin, next to this paragraph, Alida wrote “2×4” as her edit.  When I asked her what it meant, she advised that I was hitting the reader over the head with a two by four.  Hopefully, I have evolved to using more description rather than a wooden plank as my novel continues to progress.

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7 responses to “EPIPHANY

  1. Steve Carples

    Now, this is good writing. You shared a very meaningful experience in your life, and this divulged a great deal about your character. No 2×4, just straight, heartfelt sentiment! I think your writing coach would concur. And, MAZAL TOV again on your new granddaughter.

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  2. kohlrogge@comcast.net

    Thanks for the cool update.

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  3. THOMAS P STILLMAN

    Mark,
    We haven’t talked since the baby was born. All my best. Sounds like all is good. See you soon.

    TS

    Sent from my iPad

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  4. Nice post, Mark. I agree with Steve–your post was evocative, simple, moving. It zoomed me back to the births of my own grandchildren and those early hours and days. Your remark about using a scene to develop character was very helpful–not to mention witty!

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